It has been a while
Guess that's my writing style
Feeling crazed, like the hatter
Don't understand, am I feeling sadder?
There are things which I regret
Too bad those things I can't forget
Now I see things at a distance
In my mind, such hesitance
Mistakes which I dare not repeat
Things I've stood for, now keep me in my seat.
I miss you, but it doesn't matter.
Alice rarely sees the hatter.
Events pass my head in a flurry
Time jumps ahead, it's in a hurry
I am scared, gone, I'm lost
Want to be found, but can't pay the cost
Lukewarm to me, are all the joys
Can't clear up all the white noise
No longer want to be a chatter
My heart, my mind, appear to be
Shattered
5 comments:
this is good... ever gonna write something cheery and happy that doesn't make a mother worry so much?
=D
If a poem makes you feel something when you read it, it's good. When reading it I felt a little sad, but then you also had these great lines in there that made me excited. I love that time is in a hurry, and the Hatter references. I somehow ended up feeling uplifted after reading it. So good job. You're awesome.
i love anything that references alice. while reading this i felt like i could have written it. i've felt all these emotions so many times. i like it when i can totally relate.
totally can relate.
I wish I knew exactly what this was about. We don't talk much, anymore. Let's play soon...
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